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Lilyfur
Mar 13, 2010 20:32:14 GMT -5
Post by sora on Mar 13, 2010 20:32:14 GMT -5
Name: Lilyfur Age: 20 Moons Gender: She cat Clan: Riverclan Rank: Deputy
Description: Lilyfur has gray fur with a white belly. Her eyes are yellow and shine brightly when she's excited. Her legs are short and it's harder for her to jump over things. Her long, silky fur makes it difficult for her to swim. Lilyfur has one long stripe going down her small face. Her small body makes it easier for her to get into places other cats can't get in for prey.
Personality: Lilyfur is very nice, but has a short temper. She is very happy with being deputy and respects everyone in her clan. She can be very nasty when someone is mean to her friends, but she doesn't misuse her deputyship by punishing them for no reason. When enemy warriors attack the clan, she fights back, matching them paw for paw even though her small size makes it harder for her. She longs to have kits of her own, but hasn't found a mate yet.
History: Lilyfur was a calm kit and liked to play with her siblings. She loved to play in the little puddles in the camp. When she was apprenticed, she hated to do anything wrong. She always wanted to catch the largest prey and keep everyone safe. As a warrior, she liked to mess around with her friends. When she became deputy, she tried her best to do what was right for her clan. Lilyfur also makes sure that she keeps in shape by going on as many patrols as she can.
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Lilyfur
Mar 13, 2010 20:35:55 GMT -5
Post by The Voice of Truth on Mar 13, 2010 20:35:55 GMT -5
can you add like 3 more lines to everything please? just 3 thats all im asking.
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Lilyfur
Mar 13, 2010 21:05:42 GMT -5
Post by sora on Mar 13, 2010 21:05:42 GMT -5
Okay! =D
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Lilyfur
Mar 13, 2010 21:25:27 GMT -5
Post by sora on Mar 13, 2010 21:25:27 GMT -5
Is this better or do I need to fix it a little bit more?
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