Post by Snow on Nov 10, 2010 15:05:39 GMT -5
NAME: Snowflower
AGE: 30 moons
RANK: Deputy
GENDER: She-cat
CLAN: Riverclan
PERSONALITY:
To Her Clan: Snowflower is slow to anger and she knows when to be patient and kind. Snowflower cares most for the clans kits; she believes that they are the most important part of the clan. She's very focused and takes the warrior code very seriously. Snowflower's clan always comes first. She would give her life for anyone of them.
To Her Enemies: In battle, Snowflower is fierce and fast. Snowflower knows how to keep her head in battle and remain in control of her clan. She knows how to hide her emotions from her enemies, and she thinks before she gives the commands to attack. However, once the fighting starts she is a cunning enemy and is hard to fool. Her greatest strength is her fighting ability.
To All: Snowflower comes across a more of the silent type but she knows when to speak up and isn't afraid to give orders. She believes in being honest and is very trust-worthy. She is respectful to her superiors but isn't afraid to tell them when they are wrong. She won’t let other push her around. She believes in doing what is right and in being loyal to her clan and to those she loves.
Her weaknesses: Snowflower is prideful and hates to admit she’s wrong but she knows when she has to. When she was younger she was arrogant and mischievous, very much a handful, but since that time she has gained wisdom. Snoflower is the type who will forgive but not forget. She can sometimes hold past actions against other clans.
DESCRIPTION:
Snowflower has medium length fur that is solid white but the first thing you really notice when you look at her are her stunning green eyes that seem to pierce you. She is petite but not to be underestimated because she's very fast and is a skilled fighter.
HISTORY:
Snowkit was born into Thunderclan on chilly-leaf fall night and was named for her solid-white pelt. She was born to a pretty she-cat named Blackflower and a tom named Leafstorm storm. Snowkit had a completely normal birth and there were two kits in the litter. Snowkit’s brother’s name was Sealkit and he was the calmer of the two kits. Snowkit was a fun-loving kit and was caught sneaking out of camp more than a few times. She was close to her brother but never listened when he told her not to sneak out.
Snowpaw was a mischievous apprentice who had an attitude and never did what she was told. Her mentor had a hard time teaching her because she didn’t like to listen however Sealpaw always listened and did what he was told. After her brother was killed in a battle Snowpaw felt guilty for the trouble she had caused. She had loved her brother and decided that she would always keep a part of him with her. After doing that Snowpaw began to try to be more like her brother. She listened and worked hard to learn to be wise and patient.
Snowflower spent the night of her vigil deep in thought about the warrior she wanted to be. She remembered her brother and his love and devotion to the clan and she decided that that was what kind of warrior she wanted to be. Only a moon after she was named a warrior her mother died giving birth to her second litter of kits that were all born dead. Snowflower grieved for a long time but it only made her more determined to be a great warrior. After 13 moons of being a full warrior and training an apprentice, Snowflower’s dedication paid off and she was named deputy after the former one retired.
After being names deputy Snowflower worked hard to serve her clan. She matured even more and gained more wisdom as she helped to care for her clan. She learned what ways were best to meet certain needs and was always the first to visit the new kits with her leader. During this time Snowflower took on her second apprentice.
. We have already had a Thunderclan leader accepted but just not added yet. I am sorry to say. But your bio was nicely done and I will be more than happy to accept it if you will please change the rank and name to warrior terms.. 