shellfur

[peacestar]

Name:Shellfur
Age:19 moons
Gender:Female
Rank:Apprentice
Clan:Shadow

Desorption:Shelllfur has a gray pelt with dark green eyes. She has long strong legs for running far distances. She is the best the best for jumped and racing.

Personality: She is is a farly nice cat but he can get mean if you make him.She is also playful. She will also do anything she can for his clan that he can do. She is prod Her loyalty her dad would also be prod her mom use to say.

History:It is short but sad.First she was born right after she was born. She still had had her mom. For about half of her life she did.Her mom got sick when she was nine moons.She died when she was ten. She was said .but that what made her stonger

[rene]

just a quick question, you said she was an apprentice but she has a warrior name. DO you mean warrior here or perhaps she's an MCA?

[peacestar]

Sorry I did mean a med cat

[Flamewhisper]

Ok, make sure to fix that by adding Med cat to it, or MCA. Also add more to personality and description. It's way too short. Also at a bit to histoy. Also,your history doesn't make much sense, just so you know, it seems to have some words missing. Anyway, sorry if any of this sound mean, I really hope it doesn't. If it does, I'm really, really sorry.

[rene]

well no everyone gets accepted but can you change your rank I believe that the MC and MCA spot is taken Im honestly not entirely sure I will get a hold of shade and ask...

[sora]

yeah, it has. I think Grimnight was the MCA. I forgot who the MC is.

[*~Roseyy<3]

I just think she need a lot of work done on it, srry peace but its true.

[The Voice of Truth]

im very sorry, this is my fault, medicine cat from shadowclan is taken by olive, she plays groseheart and after i saw your bio from accepting groseheart, i feel terrible. but if you like you can change it to windclan medicine cat or medicine cat apprentice =) Very very sorry about this!!

Sweetie, just a few more sentences on decription and history and personality, it will be just fine, =)

p.s. very sorry

[SHADEYY BEAR ?!]

I already told EVERYONE that we don't have strict standards here. She is accepted, I'm sorry for the wait. The only time ANY correcting needs to be done on Personality, description, history and so on is when it's a high rank.